Sunday, July 4, 2010

Writing On Fridays

Writing On Fridays

We met in RedClay Writing Your Memoirs workshop
began meeting on Fridays.
Writing Down the Bones


We process our lives,
 relishing tomato-goat-cheese-scallions soup,
a Prosciutto salad,
 time together.

She read a Robert Frost poem 
The Exposed Nest.
This led to a myriad of comments
as romantics, as Mothers, as nest builders.
I told my tale of being too near a nest
in the plum tree and being whomped in the head
this week by a Mother Brown Thrasher.
Such a protective instinctive force.
Stunned me.


We picked six words from the Robert Frost book
to write about:

quest, scorns, ripeness,relation, misty, human.

(We don’t have to use all the words.)

I wrote:

Who is it that scorns thorns
hacking his way on his quest?
Misty thoughts
patiently waiting
turn into ripeness.
The thorny bushes part
the mystery revealed.
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She wrote:

Such a quest
scorns truth
seeks misty illusions
a ripeness merely soft
human tendrils
set among the shade of trees
imagining another green.

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This is why we write on Fridays.

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stay tuned . . .
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1 comment:

  1. Chip--what a good exercise and what fine results! Your blog is inviting and doesn't disappoint. Keep it up, Goddess Sister!

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